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Chainwriting :

 In the future, I'll go to KMLA (Korean Minjok Leadership Academy). I will study hard during the camp, and get good grades. After I enter to KMLA, I will go to Seoul National University. But, I'm worried about me. Sometimes I wonder how can I do it. Then I decide, of course I can. I know that positive thinking is important.
 I imagine. Someday, I'll be a president. If I will be elected, I'll change many things in Korea.
 First, I'll give more freedom to students, because students study too much, so they could be very tired. I'll make a lot of camp to make students play a lot.
 Also, I want all the students to do home-schooling, and only first-class students go to school. It will be great!! If they go to school, they will have math tests. If they don't do their homework or don't listen classes, they'll fail the test and get bad score. If they fail the test more than five times in a year, they should study the same grade one more time. On the other hand, students will have some free time when they study hard for math tests.


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...Hmm, I think the story is going weird ;;

At first, the topic was about entering KMLA, but it changed to the studying life of students in future.

Maybe there can be some transitions when the writer changed.

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Hi <3

My name is Lily, and I'm the 17th student in GLPS camp.

Nice to meet U ^-^